critique session

hi everyone ;)

this is what i doing currently

logo before

ammended logo (with inner shadow)

comment:

why make it 3D?

if there's no reason, then just stick with the original one

comment:

something wrong with this slide

since my logo is customize then why i allow others re-create it

comment:

make it more details, add explanation

can it be distort?

can flip?

comment:

the design is a bit busy

why make it transparent? any reason?

uhmmmm zzzz think in wrong way :3

if die-cut M for the left,

die-cut S for the right

ends up will see nothing -.-

comment:

too simple and normal

explore more!

comment:

why using window-envelope?

comment:

why make planner?

how do people keep this if separate to 12 different pieces?

there's some problems with the planner back design.

why people want to arrange them together? 

yet most of the people will stick the planner on wall

then what for the back design?

Research Online: Business Card

this company logo is a ambigram 

and therefore the emboss and deboss work in both side 

uhmmmmm I don't really like this design

the first time i saw this was about one year ago

I felt 'WHOA' at the first moment

yes, only the first second when i see it

but not the following seconds aha

quite clever design

but

din have strong brand identity

veryyyyyyyyyyyy smart design

one of my favorite piece!!

very creative!!

(print on different material)

(print on different material)

looks cool when connect all of the business cards

BUT

who is going to collect eight of it?

feel boring with the rectangular standard business card?

then why not try a round one

but it needs to have some reasons why use round instead of rectangular

transparent business card

looks cool!

4 pages business card

play with figure & ground

???????

is there any one will 'eat' the business card o.o

All above are design in very strong concept.

keep it simple but not empty

Why they can do it?

Why i find it so hard?

Every little element on the artwork must have some reasons behind

AHHHH!

this is killing me seriously, indeed

Why I feel so lost in this semester?

YES

truly

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remember#

design with reason, not randomly