Final Presentation- ppt

critique session

hi everyone ;)

this is what i doing currently

logo before

ammended logo (with inner shadow)

comment:

why make it 3D?

if there's no reason, then just stick with the original one

comment:

something wrong with this slide

since my logo is customize then why i allow others re-create it

comment:

make it more details, add explanation

can it be distort?

can flip?

comment:

the design is a bit busy

why make it transparent? any reason?

uhmmmm zzzz think in wrong way :3

if die-cut M for the left,

die-cut S for the right

ends up will see nothing -.-

comment:

too simple and normal

explore more!

comment:

why using window-envelope?

comment:

why make planner?

how do people keep this if separate to 12 different pieces?

there's some problems with the planner back design.

why people want to arrange them together? 

yet most of the people will stick the planner on wall

then what for the back design?